17 marks
Q1 = 4/8
Q2 = 7/12
Q3 = 6/12
Grade C
WWW: There is the basis of an excellent response here and you've clearly engaged with the questions but we need to work on time management
EBI/LR: The balance is wrong - You've written the most for Q1 despite it being worth fewer marks
where is Todorov for Q1?!
Organisation is an area to look at as Q2 and Q3 are one paragraph each. Perhaps a brief plan would help?
Q2 you drift from representation to audience it's part of the Question but I think you lose the Rep. focus
Re-write Q2 or Q3 on your blog, adding a lot more and organising
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